Subject Areas: English Instructor: Lois Rodgers School: Patagonia High School District: Patagonia High School District, Patagonia, AZ Grade Level: Grades 10 -12 Schools demographics:
PO 2. Explain different elements of figurative
language, including simile, metaphor, personification, hyperbole,
symbolism, allusion, and imagery in a literary selection - Grade
9.
PO 3. Analyze a writer's word choice and imagery
as a means to appeal to the reader's senses and to set the tone,
providing evidence from the text to support the analysis - Grade
10.
Strand 3: Comprehending Informational Text
Concept 1:Expository Text-
Identify, analyze, and apply knowledge of the purpose, structures and elements of expository text.
PO 1. Compare (and contrast) original text to
a summary for accuracy of the main ideas, inclusion of critical
details, and the extent to which it conveys the underlying meaning
of the original text.
PO 3. Evaluate the evidence used to support the
author's perspective contained within both primary and secondary
sources. (Connected to Research Strand in Writing) - Grade 11.
PO 4. Compare (and contrast) readings on the
same topic, by explaining how authors reach the same or different
conclusions based upon differences in evidence, reasoning, assumptions,
purposes, beliefs, biases, and argument - Grade 12.
PO 5. Identify an author's implicit and stated
assumptions about a subject, based upon evidence in the selection
- Grade 12.
Subject Area: Writing
W-P1.Use transitional devices; varied sentence structures;
the active voice; parallel structures; supporting details, phrases and
clauses; and correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar
and usage to sharpen the focus and clarify the meaning of their writings.
PO 1. Use transitions (e.g., conjunctive adverbs,
coordinating conjunctions, subordinating conjunctions) where appropriate.
PO 2. Vary sentence structure (e.g., compound,
complex, compound-complex)
PO 3. Use active voice as appropriate to purpose
(e.g., creative writing, expository writing)
PO 4. Use parallel structure appropriately
PO 5.Sharpen the focus and clarify the meaning
of their writing through the appropriate use of:
capitalization
standard grammar and usage (e.g., subject-verb agreement, pronoun
agreement and consistency of verb tense)
spelling, with the use of a dictionary/thesaurus (as needed)
W-P3.Write an analysis of an author's use of literary
elements such as character, setting, theme, plot, figurative language
and point of view.
PO 1. Develop a thesis that states a position
about the author's use of literary elements.
PO 2. Support the thesis with relevant examples
from the selection.
PO 3. Analyze the author's use of literary elements
(e.g., character, setting and theme)
PO 4. Organize the analysis with a clear beginning,
middle and ending.
Materials and Resources:
Word processor
Unit on Darkness PowerPoint Presentation
The Power of Patterns handout
Aiming Towards AIMS handout
Six Trait Writing Rubric
Checklist for Analytical Expository
Exemplary project movie
Teacher computer
LCD Projector
Instructional Activities:
Opening
Provide overview of the lesson and set the context for viewing the Exemplary
Group Project movie. Provide questions for focused viewing.
View Exemplary Group Project
Show the movie using the LCD projector and discuss
View Unit of Darkness PowerPoint presentation
View the presentation and pose questions to facilitate students making
connections.
Multiple Perspectives
Review with students the four different ways of looking at evil that
they have studied through literature
Expository Writing and Literary Analysis: A Multi-Genre Approach
to Six Traits Writing
The prewriting techniques that accompany this assignment should include reading, discussion, and outlining.
Students who do not know how to do this type of writing should begin by writing body paragraphs with clear topic sentences. See body paragraphs on writing checklist. Have students outline body paragraphs before writing them. Follow this process until students have a good grasp of writing topic sentences and supporting details. Stress the ideas of leading into evidence (lead), paraphrasing or quoting evidence, and analyzing. Teach documentation of outside sources at the same time even if you are using a novel as your primary source. Each paragraph should have at least three or four drafts: outline (prewriting), draft one, draft two (edited to improve diction and content), draft three (typed and edited for conventions.) Place all drafts on the back with most recent draft on top. Ask students to highlight changes.
Following the mastery of body paragraphs and topic sentences, ask students to formulate complete outlines for a paper, using checklist for introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. The teacher should work with the students to formulate the outline.
Throughout the process of teaching this type of writing, use oral and written metacognition, requiring that students say and write systematically the process that they are following.
Then ask students to turn in their work in parts for peer or teacher review or both. Use the checklist to explain how to write the different parts. Have students revise the different parts: introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Provide models to assist the students when they are writing the different sections of the paper. Ask students if they can share their work with classmates. Keep sample papers for the next year. Write a model yourself if you do not have one.
Always give plenty of time for the students to write, revise, and finalize their work. Writing is a process that demands time and revisions.
Require the final draft to be typed and accompanied by other drafts.
Sharing Student Work
Select students to present their work that exemplifies the characteristics/traits you want to highlight.
Assessment:
Expository Writing and Literary Analysis: A Multi-Genre Approach
to Six Traits Writing
Use 6-trait rubric to score final drafts. Consider giving an effort
grade in addition to 6-trait rubric score.
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